***
“The sun’s never up but certainly down
Let me slay you this night,
before you become a mist at dawn.”
Your love -- a nootropic supplement
of noxiousness " stuck deep in my
phenomenal heart;
Your spirit -- an impassioned, oratorical
intuition of abstractions
belonged to nocuous femdom..
makes us both swingers ov’r the fertility of
possessive/dominant night,
I undoubtedly shoot my liquid in you
& you get inseminated by me, I recite.
“See, I slay you with evocative aggression
You loose your everything to me,
& we both go hooked (chocked) up with transgression.”
Let me slay you this night,
before you become a mist at dawn.”
Your love -- a nootropic supplement
of noxiousness " stuck deep in my
phenomenal heart;
Your spirit -- an impassioned, oratorical
intuition of abstractions
belonged to nocuous femdom..
makes us both swingers ov’r the fertility of
possessive/dominant night,
I undoubtedly shoot my liquid in you
& you get inseminated by me, I recite.
“See, I slay you with evocative aggression
You loose your everything to me,
& we both go hooked (chocked) up with transgression.”
***
"Do things with passion.
Make love with aggression.
Feel the electricity deep inside
for the sake of transgression."
Ps. Here's a prompt - writingprompt that I'd tweeted on my #twitter page & had got a very good .. even great response from web-writers. Not even my followers but the rest of the writers too retweeted and liked/favorite my this below tweet. (6-R and 4-F) .. have a look:
Make love with aggression.
Feel the electricity deep inside
for the sake of transgression."
Lynn enjoyed reading this poetry to the fullest & saved it to her library:
ReplyDeleteLynn:
sumptuous word orchestration! A saturating display of intense passion and devotion, dear poet :) This will go into my library for sure! Intoxicating poetry :)
Misha, a new writer who visits across by my pages & reviews the write: Beautiful imagery here!! Great write =)
ReplyDeleteJulie:
ReplyDeleteWow!!! I love the passion in your words...
“See, I slay you with evocative aggression
You loose your everything to me,
& we both go hooked (chocked) up with transgression.”
Brilliant!
Julie
Craig:
ReplyDelete"Your words travel over wild and fierce thoughts in the sweetest darkness... It is an impassioned, poignant flow of words in the magic of the night... pressed to the sheets of the lingering lines. Powerful!"
Ella, she's also a new writer, who stops across by my pages the very first write and states:
ReplyDeleteElla:
"I thought this was really good! I like the slight rhymes. I found it very dark but compelling."