Inferno ~ The Helpless Night

Firmly naked... she was so wrapped around the lace of curtain

Gasp, I snatched her real hard. O' her prime age -- so Uncertain.

~*~*~

Her rising young age had her sleepless...

..ov’r the tints of pastel nights;

She took motionless curves ov’r the edges;

Like a fish without water, she squirmed all ov’r the lonely room

It’s been in ages...  since she spanked with boom

So, Serpent, I became for her... for life...

..couldn’t see her passing through such tremors’ of sudden love.

Behind the veil of epidemic night

& under the sharp predispositions of cockled moon,

I violently, enormously & utterly vigorously fed to her captivating hunger.

Her warbler prime age full of intense oozing appeal..

...discoed blatantly during nasty hours with deep possessions', first

Helplessly wrapped in the advancement of quivering night, I entered her womanhood;

& destructively quenched her insatiable thirst

She hummed for a moment, but needed some more.. 

... was reaching beyond sexual appeal

I got stunned to see such raged appetite

-- O' the fifty shades on fifth wheel --

I listened to her ‘Ahann... Ahann’ ov’r the bad behaviour of naked night...

splashed by the inferno... of lust, 

She relinquished herself to me & I punished her real hard, Thunderously Malign.

~*~*~

I tasted her skin, Rage

The night was helpless, during intercourse, so her prime age.

Special Note:

This's a very fascinating write itself. I had posted it across web around on 8-9 July/2015 & got smashing reviews from across the web-writers. It's always pretty interesting to hear from others. Today, on 13-14th. July/2015, one writer named "Lynn" (from web) reviewed this write and claimed herself to be one of my fans. Let's take a look at her review:

Lynn: exquisitely seductive and yet tastefully splayed and served for in a ballet of passion for the reader :)

You're a passionately gifted writer, dear poet, and I am a fan for sure :)

Her review made my night. It's night as of this very moment and I just thought to paste her review with the post.. as a recollection of memory. I find some kinda inspiration in words when people/writers read my stuffs & do let me know what they resonate from there. Always amazing!

She deserved more than thanks, cause, there's very few ones who truly become your fan, so. I wrote her a very beautiful poetry to thank her. Here's a poetry that I wrote for her:

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"The sun bounded down...

every ray of its sadism stepped down to your pedicure feet;

Winds bowed their coldness

to the.. moistness of your furrowed lips,

When, the rain was ‘bout to fall down ‘pon raged hearts,

you waved the wand of love across lives

& blew the clouds away to the tryst of coastline

The world... the moon chuckled to have the universe

so intoxicated ‘bout you;

You got the rein ‘pon uncontrolled hearts...

For that, sadistic breaths would loose/lost toward you

& As the sapphire ocean kissed the glimpse of your figment

Nothing seemed to be alive anymore...

just without you,

The lord of love & the God of etiquettes

both relinquished themselves to your noxious smiles

You embraced the whole world... for good

& had an every shade of heart divined, undisguised."

***

And. here comes her reply with more wisdom:

Lynn:

Adams,

I love the poem :))) Thank you so much, for taking the time to express your gratitude in such a beautiful way. I am truly honored and deeply moved that you would do such a thing. 

Reading your work...the pleasure is always mine, sir :) You write of passion with class and finesse. It's melodic, sensual, AND intense, without being vulgar in any way. That is true artistry at it's finest :)

This thoughtfulness you have given to me, is a gift of kindness that speaks volumes of your character, Adams.

               Definately a fan....

                       Lynn