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Wanted---Unwanted kitten she has ever been
What more she longed to be
is indulging the pleasure of trouble-boost--ed/ing ping.
Body---Network was strong enough
to bring/take her to cloud nine,
I lifted up her from armpits & wrapped entrapped her within.
I asked her for having the ride of styled rider
She shuddered her indicator---butts
& had her well---curved body more wilder.
Unfaithful king, I was. Selfie Queen, she's ever been
& every breath she inhaled during mild hours...
got marked up with the trademark of no---apologetic sin.
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Ps. I also posted this write on mah other websites (literature website) as always I do, & fortunately, I got a very cheering & delightful review from one of the writers named "L. Michelle Corp" on this poetry where she writes:
L. Michelle Corp: "This makes me feel naked. Reminds me of E. E. Cummings."
What a beautiful review she writes. It's kinda very honorable to me that my stuffs remind 'em legendary poetry written by legends.
And.. don't forget to visit the below link if you forget to click on the above word: Sin
http://frameuponthehearts.blogspot.in/2015/09/delection-of-sin.html
This's also one of my latest written write that's quite same in rhyme but way beyond in perspectives of love insights.
And.. don't forget to visit the below link if you forget to click on the above word: Sin
http://frameuponthehearts.blogspot.in/2015/09/delection-of-sin.html
This's also one of my latest written write that's quite same in rhyme but way beyond in perspectives of love insights.
Today, when I post this write to my other literary site, I meet some new authors/writers who seems to be.. quite bewitched with what I even feed to their bare naked hearts. A very first & anew writer that visits my page's named "L. Michelle" from "SouthWest, FL"...
ReplyDelete... let's read what she writes into the review:
Michelle: "This makes me feel naked. Reminds me of E. E. Cummings."
Haha, whatss? Well, at first I got stunned to read her words, but a sec. later, a smile dispersed into my face, & I felt quite humbled to have her naked.. *kidding*...
... but seriously, it's intriguing that my write brings her to say something like this & more importantly, .. makes her feel comfortable enough to address it all so openly into the convo.
"Whao. What a review!" I walked the floor with smiles xoxo ;)
Another review comes from "Craig", who writes:
ReplyDelete"Your words provide such a glimpse into our modern movements and motions, this view that catches light of the self in the soul. What are we becoming? And how will this new world help us find ourselves beyond small screens? Brilliantly woven, my friend."
Well, I get a review from one of the writer who belongs to "Rome". I haven't met her earlier before, but today, it's quite fascinating that stops by & leaves her words into the review:
ReplyDeleteA. Mihaela: "I like your playful words, you are indeed a master in this! For your info, I hardly read others, however on this site i was so surprised to find few really great ones. As I said, playful words arranged in a such nice way."
By the way, she's a very creative poetess. If you want to leaf through the folios of her creativity then go visit her "you tube" channel or videos and get find some peace. Yeah, she's a romantic writer, a very romantic one who plays with words, tranquilly ;)