Frivolity’s not what my love’s ‘bout. Get it?
Felicity’s for what I often devout. know it!
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My poetic words at once confuse... but delight you, for sure
It’s quite a... charming conundrum that certainly obliges you, my whore
You be substantive. For you, hann, Centipede, I become, nahh?
You wring the mist off your stimulant breath...
& I quietly salve your ears with the chum of hum, wahh.
I’m enthralled to have you so delectable, pungent, & erotically ironic
Merciless demon, I’m so you must be romantically sarcastic
Pillow fight’s what you’re ultimately bewitched with
Tender love & damnation sooth you with infernal pantomime, hell so indecisive
Your colden---breath shape the mordacity... of intangible winds,
I carve you well in some Romania figureheads
& you certainly get captured into the anthology of mid-dreams
Then, Melodically, I wake you up ov’r the nights’,
& waft you well to the obsession of chex mix
You sniffed the ménage of my love & impose its tapestry ‘pon heart, sadistically cathartic.
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As always, one of my fav. writer-friends leave a very "fascinating" review to my other literary site that certainly chuckles me up, for a moment:
ReplyDeleteLynn:
"Haha certainly always an interesting read, sir. I like these lines: "Your colden-breath-shape the mordacity...of intangible winds" Nice! Interesting how you always play love with darkness. You certainly have your own unique style of expression."
Another review comes from "Kelly", I might haven't mentioned 'bout her in my many posts so before I share her review with you folks, let me share something with you that she's from "San Diego, CA", & is one of the sexiest writers who's been writing ov'r the decades of years so, quite obviously, she's well experienced, thoughtful & productive to be read. Her reviews're even quite simplistic to be addressed in soothing words:
ReplyDeleteKelly:
"I can honestly say I have never read anything like this, and I mean that in the kindest way! It may not be my forte, but I believe your expression is by far, incomparable!"
Another review comes from Connie:
ReplyDelete"Tender love & damnation sooth you with infernal pantomime, hell so indecisive" cleverly written.