"Doing love's easy but living it hard
Your night's mine, you may satisfy my heart."
Please me with the warmth of your mouth
I've been lone ov'r the longed years,
Come here & quench the thirst of our own
Take my hand & i'll take your everything
Loose your feet & i'll snatch your heartbeats
I’m dying of thirst so extinguish such feelings
Don’t look at me like you be dreaming
I’m real here to devout you alive;
swallow your saliva & chew you with delight.
"It's delectation that you & I need
Your flesh's what... that making me breathe."
Don't tell me the cost of your fabricated wears
I only believe in tearing 'em apart
Don't hide your panoramic cleavages with hands
I'm born real man to play with 'em real hard
What your bottom says, I can clearly figure it all out
Don’t hide your flesh...
My tool longs to have your curvaceous cave knock-ed out
I’m --- The Sin myself & you --- the reason of my sinful life
Let me dig your everything with pleasure,
cause... you’re already locked up in position “69”.
"I breathe well seeing you de-hydrated
Till your morn comes , we know, you mated."
but you want it first before getting embraced
Don't run away of me, no matter how majestically...
you pace back to the wall of hallway,
I'm here to...
spoil your religion; your faith,
your loyalty & undoubtedly, your A+ grade...
to make your nights unfaithfully, may or may not be... degrade
Follow my commands &...
allow me to remove the stress of your holy day
Utmost, A beautiful housewife you’ve ever been;
Of course, Busy mommy, breathtakingly, you’re
Your drunken husband sleeping right ov’r the couch
Don't worry, your kids won’t be listening to your “ouch”
They resting well in new cradle
Let me take their nasty mommy on the table
& etch her with an every quiver of pain for the sake of having pleasure.
"Yes, it's hunger with regard
that brings real nice delectation - an unfaithful night - to spirits... with reward."
Beautiful review from "Lynn":
ReplyDeleteLynn: "Enticing words from the "devil" himself. How I see it. Women are pray and you are on the hunt. You have come to drain them so you can "feel" THEM ...something other than you. "Doing love's easy, but living it hard". Interesting how you call this love. To "spoil" them and leave them completely empty.
This is how I'm reading it. Please correct me if I'm wrong, dear poet. As always, an intriguing read, sir."
I replied to Lynn:
"You're right... as always.
"Makin' woman unfaithfully & so sadistically DRAIN's all what the devily heart's needs're 'bout ---"Love with lust & the breathtaking Lust with emotional attachments --- The Delectation".
Preciously, very deep perspectives you put into the review with the pleasure of your "own" -- the sighs. What I treasure 'bout your reviews is that you Read but don't "REACT", cause, you know how to "RESPONSE" with kindness & that's all what a writers expects from his loyal/potential readers so, thank you for being kind, generous & phenomenally smashing ov'r my words & always getting 'em "Right". Much appreciated."
Lynn stated in a quick response:
"Yes, well, you can't make someone unfaithful unless they want to be :) And...you are just as kind and generous with your reviews, dear friend."
Haha, and it makes me still chuckle. See, reading her reviews's always fascinating thing to do with time ;)
Another review comes from Connie:
ReplyDelete"this is incredible, "spoil your religion; your faith, your loyalty & undoubtedly, your A+ grade..." BRILLIANT."
Rubie, one of my web writers friend, from "NJ" stops across by my page after a very long time & leaves her delightful words into the review:
ReplyDeleteRubie: ""I'll snatch your heartbeats". What an incredibly romantic line...
I also enjoyed the added layer of the "danger" of lovemaking whilst husband and children are nearby. Quite the titillating write!"