She cried under the phase of blood-night
with much redemption to her broken faith,
He ate her alive, & marked her whole life
with desperation, & by the tempted hunger of inhibition belonged to alpha-wraith
Her snowy naked body lied upon black sheet
sprawled over the concrete of darkness,
Ah - Her shimmery sighs reverberated across the forsaken street
made him pushing her more into the grave of blackness with hardness, Oh bloody-mess
Her tears rolled down her white cheeks
He drank them all, & swallowed her lime down,
She was locked under the rocked body of crocked creep
& got eaten by him lying on all over the arena of salacious ground
Her warmth made the night more full of lust
He looked at into her sapphire eyes,
& made hard strokes into her flesh to get burst
Oh she cried, but Nobody heard her voice;
No-one dared to save her,
She had no option not even any choice
than screaming aloud .. heart to heart (s)
Then, she looked up at into the glimpse of mid-night
Stars were twinkling right up into the skies,
& starring back at her into the bountiful prism found into her sparkling eyes,
Soon, His fingers creep into her scented hair,
& the face hid behind her fragrant neck
She reached... to extremes; to edges so Fast,
& he made her lusty night remarkable to her busty spirit with haunted-lies, Blood-Lust --- No Last
By the end,
She became numbed, hell, he made her benumbed
& so motionless the way a shimmered drop rested upon the restless oceans,
His wild lips, vibrated into her fluffy flesh, helped her libido getting Hummed
but with the pleasure of pain
She couldn`t even whisper her flattered notions to secret emotions
but got emerged into the nightmare of her life with shame,
Oh dear, she got emerged into the droplets of rain
& vanished away into the ashes of vain, No blame
Haunted Night ate her alive
She cried, but no one heard her voice, I lie. (winks)
Copyright © 2015 Miles. All rights reserved.
ps. i've finally wrote the iind part of the post. it's around 02:37 here, july.31st.2016... and i just made it. check it out here:
Superb! Stuff u write in here is terribly awesome. Don't mind "terribly" i just didn't get any other wrd for explaining it. Well, the way u described the whole scene, i liked it very much. The scene directed with creed, greed, lust, nature and emotions too were vreat. Keep it up! 👍
ReplyDeleteYou make me chuckle, pal. No worries. All Good. Relax.
DeleteThanks for being kind to me as well as to this "LUSTY" post. I really appreciate the way you reviewed it. Yeah, the post`s all full of greed, creed, breed, hell, bleed with speed, with no limit with an intention to eat her spirit, hell, the devil so cheap, but an angel ain`t that 'creep'. Opps. Butter-Fingers. Lol
However, the post i`ve made could be add into my upcoming movie-project (that i`m gonna work upon only if I get time to), so, the "emotions-factor" are all what I had to put into this write. And, i`m glad that you treasure those emotions i`d stirred with the taste of "blood-lust". Thanks for reviewing, & of course, for being supportive as well. Appreciate it!